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source/sections/conclusions.tex

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 \section{Conclusions}
-To conclude I would try to better detail the implications of my thesis.\\
+To conclude I will try to sum-up my thesis and also to highlight some possible ways in which we can challenge the problems that surveillance is bringing, by describing my general point of view on this matter.\\
 I'm not saying that we have to reject all forms of on-line communications, of social media etc... Of course often these instruments can be really helpful, and for example the free circulation of knowledge that we have today in scientific and research fields would not have been possible without the technological instruments that we developed.\\
 What I tried to highlight is that we, as a society, need to really start to think that the \textbf{off-line} and \textbf{on-line} world is becoming something \textbf{unified}, and in particular that we need to take action against the state of surveillance that is gradually becoming something seen as normal and that is done for our own good.\\
 And responding to this with merely technological solutions can't be enough, we really need to promote a discussion on an ethical and moral level on the implications of surveillance and the loss of privacy.\\
 We don't have a ready to use solution for this problem, we have seen that technology alone can't solve the problem, but neither we can expect that laws made by \textbf{non technical people} will solve the issue by simply adapting the norms that we have in a different context. The technology is evolving at a too high speed to simply try to keep the pace with it. We need to at least try to think ahead and to develop a discussion framework suitable for this purpose, starting by creating committees that have \textbf{heterogeneous} types of competences and backgrounds to try to sketch solutions and norms for these kind of problematic situations.\\
 We really need \textbf{norms} and \textbf{guidelines} for the collection and management of personal information for on-line services and platforms. We can't cope with these situations only after problems arises. We need to be pro-active and to avoid to reach a point from which it would be difficult coming back.\\
-In particular what I have tried to show here is that we really need to deal with the problem of surveillance as soon as possible, because I am deeply convinced that the direction that we will follow will shape our society and us as individuals in the (not so distant) future. So regardless of our personal opinion in the matter we should try to at least think what we really want, and understand that these problems are not less important that many others issues that our society is confronting with.
-And I really believe that we should not loose this opportunity to decide what we want our \textbf{society to be} and what we want ourself to be.
+In addition to this I really think that we need to really become aware that sharing some private moments and informations about ourselves on the internet may have some drawbacks, and we really need to be informed of the possible consequences of what we do. In particular we need to be aware that once we share something online often we need to take as granted that we will not be able to make it disappear.\\
+As a last point I think that \textbf{educating} the technical people also on the \textbf{ethical} and \textbf{moral} consequences that technology may provoke can really contribute to try to find problems as early as possible and also to respond to them in the better way.\\
+In particular what I have tried to show here is that we really need to deal with the problem of surveillance as soon as possible, because I am deeply convinced that the direction that we will follow will shape our society and us as individuals in the (not so distant) future. So regardless of our personal opinion in the matter we should try to at least think at what we really want, and understand that these problems are not less important that many others issues that our society is confronting nowadays.
+And I really believe that we should not loose this opportunity to decide what we want our \textbf{society to be} and what we want us to be.

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source/sections/goingbeyond.tex

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 \section{Going Beyond}
 But how all this really connect with the claim that I'm making that we need to take action immediately in order to protect our right to privacy before it is too late?\\
-I think that another suggestion point of view is given by the novel by \textit{Dave Eggers} \textit{The Circle}\cite{thecircle}. In the book the author describe a society in which the company leader in the market of \textbf{social media} is growing at an unstoppable rhythm, expanding its business in basically every sector possible.\\
+I think that another suggestive point of view is given by the novel by \textit{Dave Eggers} \textit{The Circle}\cite{thecircle}. In the book the author describes a society in which the company leader in the market of \textbf{social media}, called \textit{The Circle}, is growing at an unstoppable rhythm, expanding its business in basically every sector possible.\\
 The main character is a new hire in this company, and through the novel she'll gain roles of major importance, but in doing that she'll sacrifice some of their initial beliefs and values embracing the philosophy of the company, that is basically to try to build a better world by embracing total openness towards the others in any scope possible. Indeed the character at the end will accept to wear a camera accessible always by anyone.\\
-I think that after having finished the novel the 99\% of the reader said to themselves that in that situation they would have reacted differently, they would have never accepted those conditions and that the situations depicted by the author is too unrealistic. While I partially agree with this last conclusion that the novel takes to the extreme the consequences of the use of technology, I can't help but noticing that in the last years there have been a huge trend regarding the use of the data provided by the user of IT services, trend that goes under the buzzword \textbf{Big Data}.\\
-So it may be true that we will never accept to voluntarily wear a camera that streams 24h per day what we see, but we also often accept conditions of use for products and services without even thinking that we may be giving access to a certain type of information to the supplier of the service or maybe even to a third party entity, as recently has happened with the Samsung Smart TV case were in the terms of use was suggested not to talk about delicate matters in front of the TV because that data could be shared with a third party entity for analysis purposes.
-Obviously this is not the only case, and basically every service that we use on-line is free just because we are paying for the use by giving our informations, often in the form of meta-data, like history of research, pattern of utilization, geo-location informations and so on.\\
-This type of culture were we are supposed to share everything may be problematic and I think that we may have different types of consequences.
-The first problem that arises goes under the name of \textbf{Social Sorting}, that is the idea to categorize people in different groups on the basis of race, education, gender, occupation and so on. The first research in this direction has been made by Professor David Lyon, and his main work on the subject is contained in this book \cite{socialsortingbook}. Obviously we can't discuss here all his vision, but for our purposes a nice recap on his point of view is this TEDx talk \cite{socialsorting}, where he tries to explain the risks of sharing personal information about ourself on social media without having really a clear idea of how this information will be used.\\
+I think that after having finished the novel the 99\% of the reader said to themselves that in that situation they would have reacted differently, they would have never accepted those conditions and that the situations depicted by the author is too unrealistic. While I partially agree with this last conclusion that the novel takes to the extreme the consequences of the use of technology, in particular in the final part where the decisions of the main character seem to be too unrealistic, I can't help but noticing that in the last years there have been a huge trend regarding the use of the data provided by the user of IT services, commonly referred to with the buzzword \textbf{big data}, and that often the use that companies and governments make of this data seems in a way similar to how the situation that is depicted in the initial setting of the novel. \\
+So it may be true that we will never accept to voluntarily wear a camera that streams 24h per day what we see, but we also often accept conditions of use for products and services without even thinking that we may be giving access to a certain type of information to the supplier of the service or maybe even to a third party entity, as recently has happened with the Samsung Smart TV case, were in the terms of use was suggested not to talk about delicate matters in front of the TV, because that data could be shared with a third party entity for analysis purposes.
+Obviously this is not the only case, and basically every on-line service that we use is free just because we are paying for the use by giving our informations, often in the form of meta-data, like history of researches, pattern of utilization, geo-location informations and so on.\\
+This type of culture were we are supposed and encouraged to share everything may be problematic and I think that we may have different types of consequences.
+The immediate problem that arises goes under the name of \textbf{Social Sorting}, that is the idea to categorize people in different groups on the basis of race, education, gender, occupation and so on. The first research in this direction has been made by Professor David Lyon, and his main work on the subject is contained in this book \cite{socialsortingbook}. Obviously we can't discuss here all his vision, but for our purposes a nice recap on his point of view is this TEDx talk \cite{socialsorting}, where he tries to explain the risks of sharing personal information about ourself on social media without having really a clear idea of how this information will be used and who will have access to these information.\\
 What I want to particularly take and underline from Lyon's idea is a way to respond to the major critic when we talk about all those risks and these problems.
 An example of counter argument is an article by \textit{Richard Posner} \cite{privacyoverrated}, where he tries to explain that often guaranteeing individual privacy goes against the \textbf{protection} of our society as a whole, because he says that often the need of privacy becomes only the need to conceal bad behaviors of individuals. I completely disagree with this point of view, because what activists and organizations that argue for the right of privacy are discussing today is not to sacrifice the security of our society, because it is obvious that for a rational person the good for a society comes before the good of an individual.\\
 But what we are experiencing today, as explained in the section before, is a society that is becoming accustomed to surveillance, and that is taking proactive part in this activity without thinking at the consequences. We are not opposing individuals with society, we are talking of how we want the \textbf{future} of our society to be \textbf{shaped}.\\
 In addition what I think that a massive Social Sorting brings is the risk of becoming simply \textbf{shadows} of our \textbf{past}. I try to explain what I mean; let's admit that we, as a society, decide that for example the benefits that a massive campaign of social sorting brings are greater than the possible threats at our freedom. For example we may decide that for opposing to terrorism we may want to give up at the U.S. border the details of our on-line activities and the access to our accounts in order to separate potentially dangerous individuals from the rest of us.\\
-There are two problems with this: the immediate counter argument is that there is evidence that the NSA surveillance activities for example never stopped a considerable terrorist attack, and this article \cite{eff} from the\textit{Electronic Frontier Foundation} is a good starting point to debunk all the thesis that surveillance prevented terrorist attacks. But this is not the main point.\\
+There are two objections to this kind of policy: the immediate counter argument is that there is evidence that the NSA surveillance activities for example never stopped a considerable terrorist attack, and this article \cite{eff} from the\textit{Electronic Frontier Foundation} is a good starting point to debunk all the thesis that surveillance prevented terrorist attacks. But this is not the main point.\\
 I think that the main problem is that if we move in this direction, it means that we accept that our society becomes a \textbf{data driven} society, where the information we produce is more important than what we are. And I think that the direct consequence of this is that, on the basis of how the data is used today and plan to be used in the future, we risk to really become \textbf{indivisible} from our \textbf{past}.\\
 The immediate risk in this scenario is that an employer may not hire us due to a photo of 10 years before where we are in an inebriated state, a photo that maybe was only representing a moment of happiness with our friends, but that extrapolated from that context tells something completely different about us, something that maybe could damage the reputation of the company we are working for. This is what the discussion on Social sorting mainly tries to evidence.\\
 But if we try to go further there is another another possible point of discussion that I think it is really relevant and that is the core of the problem. In a data driven society there is the risk of manipulation of information. It is not difficult to come up with examples as the one above were we can imagine situations were information about us \textbf{extrapolated} from the context in which it is produced can bring to completely biased and dangerous conclusions. There are possible scenarios in which this manipulation could be intentionally, but often we are used to think that since we have nothing to hide this is not really a problem, and it is only a product of paranoia. But there are situations in which this manipulation is not intentionally, but maybe the result of changed moral principles, that in a always evolving society it is something that naturally happens.\\

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 \textit{Biondi} says that in some studies has been enlightened that the birth of capitalism brought with itself the concept of the body seen as a \textbf{tool of performance}, and this also concurred in the crusade against onanism, since the possibility of behaviors that in some way could intact the abilities of the body to perform were seen much more in a negative way.\\
 Capitalism also in some way brings the idea that private vice is transformed in \textbf{public good} or virtue through commerce. And in the digital age we may withdraw the conclusion that opposing to the free circulation of information can be destructive for the good of the society and stop this creation of public virtue, or, written in another way, public security. This ultimately brings us to the commodification of everything, even private and social aspects of our lives.\\
 This last point of view seems to be based on a too huge leap. Personally, looking at our society I don't think that these conclusions are so unreasonable, but for sure they need another type of discussion, and they also touch other big and debated ethical issues, that can't be discussed here. As said before these last conclusions are not essentials to the following of the discussion, probably even \textit{Biondi} knows that these conclusions are too stretched, but she tried to sketch some possible discussion points for further analysis and discussions.\\
-What I think is important to keep from this section is the problem that in this kind of surveillance culture we are giving up some rights over our privacy, and the comparison with the crusade against onanism particularly highlights that in a so configured society we are dangerously tempted to accept everything, even that our rights become a good that we can trade in order to pursue some superior objective, and that we need to enact surveillance one with each other for our own good.\\
+What I think is important to keep from this section is the problem that in a situation of surveillance culture we are giving up some rights over our privacy, and the comparison with the crusade against onanism particularly highlights that in a so configured society we are dangerously tempted to accept everything, even that our rights become a good that we can trade in order to pursue some superior objective, and the fact that we are in some way pushed to control each other.\\
 In the next section I'll try to go further and try to sketch some other implications and issues of this type of surveillance culture.