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Andrea Gus 8 年之前
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 \begin{abstract}
 In this paper I'll try to discuss about some new problems that in my opinion technology evolution is bringing in the concept of \textbf{individual privacy}.\\
 Some authors, that already published on the topic, sustain that we should operate a change in the fundamentals rights of the human, in order to include the right to \textit{privacy} as a fundamental right for the individual.\\
-Should we extend this also to the concept of \textbf{online privacy}? I'll try to argument and give my answer on this topic.\\
-My analysis will mainly proceed by showing what happens or what could happen when we give up the right to individual privacy, and I'll try to explain why this scenario is not desirable, with a particular focus and ideas to improve the current situation.
+Should we extend this also to the concept of \textbf{online privacy}?
+In particular I want to analyze the current situation on \textbf{global surveillance} or in general \textbf{bulk data collection}, and how this is affecting our privacy rights.
+How this is affecting our society? What are the values really at stake here? It is only a problem of personal sensitivity on the matter?\\
+In doing this I'll also try to explain what I think is the current situation in this field, and try to highlight possible problems and misconceptions and how we can try to solve some of these problems.
 \end{abstract}