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 \begin{abstract}
-In this paper I'll try to discuss about some new problems that in my opinion technology evolution is bringing in the concept of \textbf{individual privacy}.\\
+In this paper I'll try to discuss about some new problems and challenges that in my opinion technology evolution is bringing in the sphere of \textbf{individual privacy}.\\
 Some authors, that already published on the topic, sustain that we should operate a change in the fundamentals rights of the human, in order to include the right to \textit{privacy} as a fundamental right for the individual.\\
 Should we extend this also to the concept of \textbf{online privacy}?
-In particular I want to analyze the current situation on \textbf{global surveillance} or in general \textbf{bulk data collection}, and how this is affecting our privacy rights.
-How this is affecting our society? What are the values really at stake here? It is only a problem of personal sensitivity on the matter?\\
-In doing this I'll also try to explain what I think is the current situation in this field, and try to highlight possible problems and misconceptions and how we can try to solve some of these problems.
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+In particular I want to analyze the current situation on \textbf{global surveillance} or in general \textbf{bulk data collection}, and how this is affecting our privacy rights and what are the issues that we may face in the near future. What I have tried to do is to give an answer to these questions:
+How this is affecting our society? What are the values really at stake here? It is only a problem of personal sensitivity on the matter?\\\end{abstract}