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Andrea Gus 8 년 전
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-\section{The Current Discussion}
+\section{Privacy and Relationships}
 Fortunately nowadays seems that the discussion for the right to privacy it is not dead. After the recent events that mainly involved leaks on how the NSA is spying us all, new discussions and questions have been arisen not only in the world of activism, but also, at least to some extent, in the general public.\\
 But usually all these discussions have a very limited scope in some sense, talking of this or that \textbf{technological issue} with the most popular platform for instant messaging, but do not cover the real problem, that is establishing whether and at which extent privacy (in our case privacy related to the on-line, or in general technological, presence of the person) can be seen as a fundamental right for the individual.\\
 This last aspect I think it is the most important and fundamental to discuss, since I see that the technology itself (more advanced than ever encryption methods, new platforms that promise anonymity etc...) can't solve the problem.

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 We can start from the \textbf{state}, and we can notice that it has been the first to reclaim the right to enhances policies that permitted to invade the individual privacy in order to guarantee a greater good, the \textbf{security} of our society. The parallelism is made with the doctors of the previous settings, that as said were the first to initiate the crusade by invoking a greater good that in that case was the health of the population.\\
 Then there are the privates, or in other words the big internet \textbf{corporations}, that make the surveillance possible by enacting the data surveillance over our communications and personal data. This category is of course mapped on the priests, thus the name of the presentation itself.\\
 The last actor is identified with the \textbf{society} itself, and is naturally mapped with the family in the previous case. It is thanks to this last actor, that is possible to realize and to impose the surveillance culture, thanks to which the systems sustains itself, being feed with all the data provided by ourself.\\
-This concludes the mapping of actors between the two scenario. We can see that, even by not agreeing completely with the point of view and the passages made by \textit{Biondi}, the similarity between the two scenario have been well highlighted. The conclusions that the presenter draws are more radical, and I'll briefly talk about them since, even not being essential for the following of the analysis, can help in understanding the previous mapping.\\
+This concludes the mapping of actors between the two scenario. We can see that, even by not agreeing completely with the point of view and the passages made by \textit{Biondi}, the similarity between the two scenario have been well highlighted.\\
+We can see how the surveillance culture is influencing in a deep way our society and the relationships that we have with each other. The comparison with the crusade is a way to make this more vivid, but I think that what \textit{Biondi} says about the fact that we as a society are a central part of the multi-polar surveillance mechanism is absolutely embraceable. The problem is no more something external, but it is becoming something of which we are part.
+The conclusions that the presenter draws are more radical, and I'll briefly talk about them since, even not being essential for the following of the analysis, can help in understanding the previous mapping.\\
 \textit{Biondi} says that in some studies has been enlightened that the birth of capitalism brought with itself the concept of the body seen as a \textbf{tool of performance}, and this also concurred in the crusade against onanism, since the possibility of behaviors that in some way could intact the abilities of the body to perform were seen much more in a negative way.\\
 Capitalism also in some way brings the idea that private vice is transformed in \textbf{public good} or virtue through commerce. And in the digital age we may withdraw the conclusion that opposing to the free circulation of information can be destructive for the good of the society and stop this creation of public virtue, or, written in another way, public security. This ultimately brings us to the commodification of everything, even private and social aspects of our lives.\\
 This last point of view seems to be based on a too huge leap. Personally, looking at our society I don't think that these conclusions are so unreasonable, but for sure they need another type of discussion, and they also touch other big and debated ethical issues, that can't be discussed here. As said before these last conclusions are not essentials to the following of the discussion, probably even \textit{Biondi} knows that these conclusions are too stretched, but she tried to sketch some possible discussion points for further analysis and discussions.\\